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in Children's Stories· Our Blog· Sweet Ideas

‘Twas the Night Before Christmas, Version 2.0

Twas the Night Before Christmas cover - Coco in Santa hat

‘Twas the night before Christmas,

when all through the house

Coco was stirring,

in search of a mouse.

 

Patiently he crouched

by the refrigerator with care,

In hopes that the mouse

would come out from under there.

Twas the Night Before Christmas - Coco in doorway

 

Carole was nestled

all snug in her bed,

With nary a vision of mice

frolicking in her head;

 

And Charlie in his pajamas

a right, jolly old chap

Had just settled down

for a long winter’s nap –

 

When suddenly, from behind the frig

there rose such a clatter,

I jumped to attention

to see what was the matter.

Twas the Night Before Christmas - Coco

 

Away from the frig

Coco flew like a flash,

Paws thrust forward, tail pounding

on the floor with a splash!

 

The moon on the crest

with the valley below,

Gave the night sky and landscape

an illuminated glow.

 

When, what to Coco’s wandering eyes

should appear,

But a miniature mouse

with eight tiny whiskers!

 

With a teeny tiny body

so lively and quick,

Coco knew in a moment

he must not be tricked!

Twas the Night Before Christmas - Coco sticking out his tongue

 

More rapid than hummingbirds

the tiny mouse came,

As Coco howled, and yowled

and took aim –

 

Coco dashed and danced

and pranced after the vixen

Like a comet, the cute mouse slipped by

like Donder and Blitzen!

Twas the Night Before Christmas - Coco looking down

 

Around the kitchen cabinets

and down the main hall

Coco and the mouse dashed away,

dashed away all!

 

All around the house

like a hurricane they fly,

Avoiding obstacles with expertise

as they whiz by.

 

Through the living room

and dining room they flew,

Into the bedrooms, bathrooms –

and Carole’s office, too!

Twas the Night Before Christmas - Coco looking up

 

And, then in a blink

Coco made a tactical goof

And the mouse disappeared

in an instant – poof!

 

As Coco bobbed his head

and was turning around

The mouse had disappeared,

nowhere to be found!

 

Coco’s fur suddenly bristled

from his head to his foot,

As he circled around sniffing,

the mouse silently shouted “woot, woot!”

Twas the Night Before Christmas - Coco irritated

 

A bundle of nerves

his fur bristled on his back,

Coco hissed and spit

as he planned his attack.

 

His eyes how they twinkled!

His whiskers how scary!

His mouth curled upward,

as he contemplated his next hail mary.

 

His droll little mouth

was drawn up like a bow,

And the whiskers on his chin

were as white as the snow!

 

Stumped, Coco sat down

and bared his teeth

Soon a Cheshire cat’s grin encircled

his face like a wreath.

 

He had a beautiful face

and a little round belly,

That shook when he cried

like a bowl full of jelly.

Twas the Night Before Christmas - Coco on back of chair

 

He was chubby and plump –

a right jolly old fat cat,

And I laughed when I saw him,

in spite of all that.

Twas the Night Before Christmas - Coco 's eyes

 

A wink of his eye

and a twist of his head,

Soon gave me to know

I had something to dread.

 

He mewed not a word,

but went straight to his work,

Hunting here, there and everywhere

then turned with a jerk,

 

And laying his ears forward

aside of his nose,

And giving a nod of his head,

from a crouch he arose.

 

He sprang to attention,

to the frig gave a hiss

Then flew down the hall towards the bedroom;

what did I miss?

Twas the Night Before Christmas - Coco sleeping

 

But I swear I heard him exclaim

as he bolted out of sight,

“Merry Christmas, Mr. Mouse,

and to all a Good Night!”

 

Editor’s note:  

We have a mouse in the house.  A cute, tiny little field mouse, who peeks out from behind something making his presence known.  Coco has been standing guard, trying to catch him for weeks.  Right now he seems to be making his home under our refrigerator and Coco camps in front of it hour after hour.  As you can tell by the photos in this post, Coco doesn’t try very hard {grin}!

Guess we’d better look into buying a few mouse traps, because Coco is a failure as a “mouser”!

Written in 1822 by Clement Clarke Moore, “The Night Before Christmas” is a well-loved classic holiday poem.  Thanks, Mr. Moore, for inspiring me and children everywhere!  And thanks to Coco, my beautiful Snowshoe Siamese, who inspires me daily with his lackadaisical view of life!

Merry Christmas card 2015

Tootles,

Carole signature

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The Halloween Dance

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A Boy Named Coco

Herding Cats

Call of the Wild

The Squish Factor

The God Complex

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Filed Under: Children's Stories, Our Blog, Sweet Ideas Tagged With: Christmas, Coco

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Comments

  1. Dawn says

    December 27, 2014 at 4:15 am

    What a happy, creative surprise to read this poem about Coco. I had read two newer posts first that were about family and friends at Christmas time, so I was surprised to #1 see the creative poem and #2 read about Coco and a little mouse. And then to realize that you “whipped it out” in under a day amazes me. You are such a creative soul, which is why I love these kinds of posts. Keep up the good work Carole.

    Reply
    • Carole says

      December 29, 2014 at 8:41 am

      Thanks, Dawn. It actually came to me in a dream, so I was sleeping before I actually wrote it! Crazy, huh? Sometimes “the magic” just comes. Thanks for the kind words.

      Reply

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